草案

After reading over it's a very good draft, on the whole, that is.

看完后草案写得很好，我指的是在总体上。

Provide feedback on draft copies of new product to the Sales and Marketing Department.

向销售和市场部门提供对新产品草案的反馈意见。

We have the following comments on your draft contract.

对贵方的合同草案我方有如下的建议。

On the other hand, it was a lot more fun to be with Bill and his friends.

在另一方面，这是一个有很多更有意思要与条例草案和他的朋友们。

Some say this is a one-man draft.

有人说这是一个人的草案。

Bill to streamline the current 34, is mainly on account of new ways to further enhance the operability.

条例草案，以精简目前的34个，主要是考虑到新的途径，进一步加强可操作性。

The script of diagnostic criteria for MODS with the illness severity score system was established. The script mainly was involved in the evaluation of seven organs or systems, including respiratory system, cardiovascular system, kidney, hemologic system, liver and alimentary system. Only one parameter was used in each organ, they were FiO2/PaO2, systolic blood pressure, serum creatinine, platelet count, conscious state and the defecation status. 0- 4 scores were endued with each indexaccording to the severity of the illnesses respectively. Every descriptor was 5 points, showing 0 point with normal organ function, and 1- 4 scores with organ dysfunction and aggravation.

建立了MODS诊断标准、病情严重度评分系统草案：主要纳入呼吸、心血管、肾脏、凝血、脑、肝脏、胃肠道7个脏器系统，每个脏器系统仅用1个指标表示其功能障碍与否，分别是氧合指数、收缩压、血清肌酐浓度、血小板计数、意识状态、血清总胆红素浓度、排便状况；每个指标结合病情严重程度分别赋予0~4分，0分为功能正常，4分为器官功能衰竭，1~4分为器官功能发生障碍且程度逐渐加重。

Cheque / draft and outstation TT through various channels

支票/草案和通过各种渠道的外部电话转帐

The principal problems concerning pecuniary penalty were:problem of establishing pecuniary penang as a principal penalty,the problem of units and grades of the pecuniary penalty.the problem of bartering pecuniary penalty for remission of terms of imprisonment,the problem of too light or too heavy an imposition of the pecuniary penalty,and the problem of the relationship between the pecuniary penalty and damages.

从1908年到1910年，中央各部院堂官、地方各省督抚、将军都统陆续上奏对大清刑律草案的签注意见，其中涉及罚金的主要问题有：罚金定为主刑问题、罚金单位和等级问题、罚金易刑问题、罚金适用的过轻与过重问题、罚金与赔偿金的关系问题。

Suggest you do this after you run the draft by your PR people for impact and persuasiveness.

建议你这样做之后，您运行草案由您的公关人的影响和说服力）。

We are in a real jam.

我们的麻烦大了。

Hey, it's Ahmet from India, that foreign exchange guy.

看，那是印度的阿曼特，国际交换生