第二点

Near the end of the race Yaniv Sivan had opened up a 20 second advantage on Nir Sivan, who was now comfortably in 2nd, but the 3rd spot had not been decided yet.

附近的比赛结束yaniv斯万已开辟了二十秒的优势，对近红外光谱的斯万，谁是现在舒适的第二，但第三点了还没有决定。

His OPS (on-base plus slugging percentage) leaped more than 200 points in the second half.

他的垒上有人长打率，我不会翻线上翻~飞跃了超过200 点在第二个一半。

The results showed that the different mass concentration of HPAM's absorbance decreases slightly when the PH value of the buffer solution is 5.0, but its reproducibility is better;In order to make the absorbance become more stable, the reaction time was identified adding proper quantities of bromine water, sodium formate and starch-cadmium iodide reagent to the solution separately; the mass concentration curve of the HPAM was draw, by means of the straight degree of the curves, the coincidence degree of the straight line about the concentration of every sampling point and so on , it shows that the mixer has good mixed effect compared with the standard curve.

如下是一些主要问题：1）文章的行文格式。文章没有按照一般科技论文的表述方式，如1是引言，2是常用方法，其实这都应该是第一部分引言里应该介绍的，引言中应扼要介绍文章的研究背景、目的，意义，采用的主要方法等。还有3是实验装置，4是实验步骤，应该这些都是第二部分，试验材料与方法。2）文章的内容。文章应主要介绍本研究的具体内容，但是本文没有，如3 实验装置部分，这个721分光光度计的原理与论文内容联系不大，根本没必要介绍，标准曲线的研究应该放在最前面等。3）文章的表述不清。如HPAM是何物，文章一直没有介绍，什么曲线的直线度、浓度与直线的重合度、什么加入溴水后的时间，应该是反应时间，总之表述不清！ 4）文章的图表。图标绘制的很难看。如图2，应该纵坐标起始点从0.25开始，这样图形就会美观很多，图3又没有纵坐标标注，还多了一个纵坐标等。5）文章的结论。文章的结论中有些严格来说不是结论，而是实验中的现象与操作注意事项。

This is done by including a special comment as either the first or second line of the source file

在源文件的第一或第二行包含一个特殊的注释就可做到这点

Even if all the assumptions stand, I can still hardly agree with the author that writers should transfer to a profitable field regardless of the spirit and responsibility of writing.

基本上上面的每一部份都要攻击，但是你的前两点写得不是太好。1）调查作为前提不具备说服力，第一：没有给出太多的调查资料，采样信息等，你注意到了；第二：比较电视节目和小说没有意义：这点可以重点提到电视和小说的对象，你注意到了，比如举了个文盲的例子，但是有点绝对。

The second step, dividing the sternocleidomastoid just below and with preservation of its upper attachment for closure and reflecting it laterally exposes the upper extension of the splenius capitis.

第二层，可见头夹肌和头半棘肌上部。头夹肌附着于上项线，分离头夹肌，在其上部附着点保留一小肌袖以便缝合，并将其向内侧翻开，显露头最长肌和头半棘肌。

However, with today's financial crunch is steep and high pressure to launch a series of land policy and now these "heretical" has been closed almost all of .8 31, all land must be linked into the trick shot; national moratorium on the approval of agricultural land to six months non-agricultural construction land; development zone approved by the investigation and stopped; not paid land transfer payments not only permit but even the land can not get pre-sale licenses are never expect; banks to stop lending or even the second set of residential land and house mortgage loans have been suspended …… it seems the real estate industry in China overnight back in 1993 to "liberate" before the macro-control period, what inflection point theory, and even the collapse of the winter will have on the spondee!

然而，今天的金融危机是陡峭的高压推出了一系列的土地政策，目前这些"邪教"已关闭几乎所有的0.8月31日，所有土地必须联系到把戏杆；国家暂停核准农业用地6个月非农业建设用地；开发区批准的调查和制止；没有支付土地出让金不仅允许，甚至土地不能获得预售许可证从未期望；银行停止贷款，甚至是第二套住宅用地和住房抵押贷款已经暂停……看来，房地产行业在中国一夜之间回到1993年的"解放"前的宏观调控时期，什么拐点理论，甚至崩溃的冬天将会对扬扬格！

August 31, all land must be linked into the trick shot; national moratorium for six months for approval of agricultural land to non-agricultural construction land; development zone approved by the investigation and stopped; not paid land transfer payments not only permit but even get pre-sale of land Permits are never expect; banks to stop lending or even the second set of residential land and house mortgage loans have been suspended …… it seems the real estate industry in China overnight back in 1993 to "liberate" before the macro-control period, what inflection point theory, and even the collapse of the winter will have on the spondee!

8月31日，所有土地必须联系到把戏杆；全国暂停半年审批农用土地向非农业建设用地；开发区批准的调查和制止；没有支付土地出让金不仅获得许可证但即使预售许可证的土地从来没有期望；银行停止贷款甚至第二套住宅用地和住房抵押贷款已经暂停……看来，房地产行业在中国一夜之间回到1993年的"解放"前的宏观调控时期，什么拐点理论，甚至崩溃的冬天将会对扬扬格！

At a second meeting, they repaired to a Chinese restaurant, where he poked a spring roll without eating it.

第二次见面是在一个中国餐馆，他点了一个春卷却没吃。

When descending the scale the second time, in staccato, do not continue all the way back down to C again.

当第二次下行时不要再到C，而到D就作为新的开始点重新向上。

And Pharaoh spoke to Joseph, saying, Your father and your brothers have come to you.

47：5 法老对约瑟说，你父亲和你弟兄们到你这里来了。

Additionally, the approximate flattening of surface strip using lines linking midpoints on perpendicular lines between geodesic curves and the unconditional extreme value method are discussed.

提出了用测地线方程、曲面上两点间短程线来计算膜结构曲面测地线的方法，同时，采用测地线间垂线的中点连线和用无约束极值法进行空间条状曲面近似展开的分析。