作文

I came today mainly because he didn't hand in a piece of composition.

我今天来的目的主要是因为他的一篇作文没有交。

In the final analysis, it is quite clear that museums are treasure troves of mankind.

同时，还要展示自己写复杂句子的能力，这是高分作文的需要。

Your writing is very good except for some wrong spellings.

除了一些拼写错误之外你的作文很好。

Department of Computer Engineering,the Ordnance Engineering College, Shijiazhuang 050003, China

论大学英语四级考试作文阅卷评分的高。。。

In the past, many people who have no job became robbers or rapers, the problem of security made the people lived in our community unsafe. Yet after the appearance of new factories, the graduate from high school who might be criminal has found a job in factories. Employment rate is increase, and the decreasing rate of crime.

当然，可能希望各位大叔大妈，哥哥姐姐，，弟弟妹妹帮忙改改，可能你会觉得我的作文像便便一样糟糕，，但希望还是您能耐着性子看完，并留下宝贵的意见，我会不断努力，让便便也有可能变成棉花糖，嗯嗯。。

There is a saying "leaving blank" in Chinese painting, a saying "symbolization" in Chinese drama and a saying "suspense" in the art of pomes and articles.

中国画有&留白&说，中国戏剧有&虚拟&说，吟诗作文有&悬念&说，目的都是给观众和读者留点遐想和创造的空间。

The are fiftyeight million people in world, but the smoker is twenty percent, about eleven thousand million people. Because of this, the circle around of us is pollusion, the health of human is very had. There are three hundred million people die for smoking every year.

评语：样题 9和样题 10这两篇作文内容与本题要求部分有关，除事先备好但与要求不符的语句外，结构与用词错误多且严重，词不达意，条理不清，不成篇章，数字表达混乱。

The mission, expected to last three to four days, is devoted almost entirely to the execution of the spacewalk, known formally as an extra-vehicular activity, or EVA, is expected to help China master the technology for docking two orbiters to create China's first orbiting space station in the next few years.

这次任务预计持续三到四天，主要用于执行太空行走任务，太空行走正式的名称是&出舱活动&，它将有助于中国掌握两颗卫星的对接技术，在未来几年建立中国的第一个空间站。诚信，真好！关于诚信的小学作文

In a word,we should form the good habit of saving time.

从这篇文章还可以看到，英语作文的起承转合会用上一些特定的词语。

We wanted to go a beautiful laurel wood to play, then wrote a laurel wood's landscape number one in the world composition today!

今天我们要去美丽的桂林玩耍，然后写一篇桂林山水甲天下作文！

I didn't watch TV last night, because it .

昨晚我没有看电视，因为电视机坏了。

Since this year, in a lot of villages of Beijing, TV of elevator liquid crystal was removed.

今年以来，在北京的很多小区里，电梯液晶电视被撤了下来。